“Fill your paper with the breathings of your heart.” ― William Wordsworth


Love & Romance

Endless Bloom

She worries that her softest bloom is gone,
The beauty that was hers in younger years.
She reminisces days of early dawn,
When flawless skin awoke to gleeful cheers.
She frets her steps have lost their sultry dance,
Her slender figure time has cast away.
She dreads her crown to white will soon advance,
So feels it is in vain to hide her gray.
But I don't see the years her mirror shows,
Instead I view a bloom's maturing glow.
Her smile, her lively eyes and button nose,
Are still like early days of long ago.
The mirror only sees her graying years,
 But I the graceful bloom beneath the tears.

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Behind the Verse

As we age, how we see ourselves in those later years may differ from how others perceive us. That can be the case in a loving marriage, where a wife may see her declining physical attractiveness as an indication that she is no longer beautiful.


However, from her husband's perspective, he not only sees her outward beauty but also her inner one, and he adores her for that beauty that she displays. That is the theme I wanted to explore with this sonnet—the worries and insecurities that come with aging and a husband's perception of his wife's beauty and grace.


Poetic form: Sonnet

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